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Team Het: One Day for Them 
4th-Mar-2007 03:34 pm
Title: One Day for Them
Author: tehgiantsquid
Team: Het
Prompt: Friendship
Rating: PG-13
Pairings/Characters: Ron/Hermione (sorta)
Warnings: The troubles a boy might have when he's 13 *g*
Length: 4744
Summary: What exactly do Ron and Hermione get up to on their first Hogsmeade weekend all on their own?
Author notes: Major thanks to jamimegan, attilatehbun, oncelikeshari, leftsockarchive, ron_tries_het, members of the Academy and my amazing flist for all their help and support in making this fic happen ♥ Thank you to the awesome mods for the extension and for organizing such a wonderful, amazing event! To the readers, I hope you enjoy this story! Feedback is always appreciated :)

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Voting for this fic is now closed!
7th-Mar-2007 02:28 am (UTC)
Hee-hee, what a fun read! Just what I needed today. :)

I loved your Ron (but that's no surprise!), and thought both he and Hermione were very canon. Excellent job!
8th-Mar-2007 12:02 am (UTC)
Thank you, hun! :DD
7th-Mar-2007 03:16 am (UTC)
Oh, this was so sweet! I just loved every minute of this. *sigh* You wrote this missing moment really brilliantly. ♥♥
8th-Mar-2007 12:03 am (UTC)
Thank you!!! ♥♥♥ I'm so glad you liked it ^^
7th-Mar-2007 09:35 pm (UTC)
You know, I don't think I've ever read a missing moment fic that dealt with their day at Hogsmeade before..... It's such a fabulous topic for a fic, and you did it really, really well. I love the blushing and the awkwardness, and Ron is such a boy! Love him.
8th-Mar-2007 12:05 am (UTC)
Thank you so much! :D I'm glad you enjoyed it!
8th-Mar-2007 01:27 am (UTC)
Oh I loved this!

So. Sweet.

I am not sure why, but this line sort of pinged my heart.

He liked her much better when she was relaxed, and when she was smiling like that, showing too much teeth and gums. She really did look nice like that...

I also really loved the Charlie story. Ron's telling of it and Hermione's reactions really capture them both so well -- and of course the story itself is great.

Your attention to detail all throughout the story was wonderful and made this not only a great missing moment from CoS -- but tied it into the whole series brilliantly.

8th-Mar-2007 06:15 am (UTC)
Thank you so much for the lovely review!! I'm so glad you liked it! :DD
8th-Mar-2007 03:59 am (UTC)
Aw, I thought this was a perfect combination of sweet and hilarious! I especially liked the embedded story with Snape because it was just so perfectly IC for him. I always like it when Snape is brought in for his teenager humiliating duties. :-D

Of course, Ron (along with Hermione) is the star of the story, and he's just right - just the right mix of still a kid and teenager, here.
8th-Mar-2007 06:15 am (UTC)
It's not a story until I can throw a Snape it ;D Thank you so much for the comment! ♥ I'm so glad you liked it, hun :))
9th-Mar-2007 06:21 pm (UTC)
This is EXCELLENT! You've done a marvelous job of weaving in the canon and keeping them both perfectly, firmly planted in Third-Year mode. Well done!

I'm sorry I didn't get to vote on this. I'm so far behind on the reading...:(
12th-Mar-2007 06:50 pm (UTC)
♥!! Thank you so much!! I'm so glad you read it and liked it, even with the pairing ;D ♥♥♥

And who cares about voting, this is so much fun! *hugs* Thank you again!
9th-Mar-2007 08:11 pm (UTC)
I was all excited about somthing squishy and squishy I recieved!
*twirls you madly*
In my head they will always be thirteen.
12th-Mar-2007 06:51 pm (UTC)
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it :))
12th-Mar-2007 01:41 am (UTC)
...and in the end you did a lovely job. :o)

This was just a perfect missing moment. It fits in so nicely without taking things to far and running away with the possibilities.


"Someone jostled Hermione, and she fell backwards against Ron's chest. "

Lucky Girl. :oD
12th-Mar-2007 06:52 pm (UTC)
Oh thank you so much! ♥ I'm so happy you enjoyed it! :DD *bounces*

Lucky girl indeed! ;D
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